Final Newspaper Advert
Feedback
I showed My documentay and advert and magazine to freinds and family and i showed the advert and magazine to people in the street as well becuase they were asy to show to people as they walked past. What i found out was that a lot of people liked what i haddone others didnt and other gave me there opinin on what i should change or make better.
Advert
Most people liked the advert but there was some help and becuase of that i have decided t listen to what they told me:
- I am going to change the text on the advert becuase it looked a little bit childish.
- Also i am going to add the real BBC logo on to the advert.
- Also not cut out the photos and keep the backgrounds on them.
- And final make the date released more ovious
Magazine
There was a lot of good things said about my magaizne but i have taken the adice and i am going to change:
- The text needs to be bigger in areas.
- Also change the text to match the advert.
- Add maybe some more photos.
- Also make the advert less about fencing and more focused on the documentary.
Documentary
There were mixed comments about my documentary beucase to som people fencing might be a bit boring or there was not enought information about fencing o help them get it so i am goig to change and add:
- Add some clips to bridge the whole story together
- Also change the voice over
- Make the volume quiter and louder in parts of the clip
- And change the text that appers on the clip
All this advise will help me to make my final prodect better.
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